On Being a Real Westerner

A young kid who gets .22 rifle from his step-father Roy, starts to discover the feeling of power over others. But before he got the rifle he had to put Roy under siege and create a lot of hints that he wanted that rifle. Roy is a stingy person, but a little kids mom was more of an obstacle for him then Roy was. After getting the rifle under certain agreements, the kid decides to break those agreements and play with it anyway he likes. Dressin up as a soldier and playing as a westerner. The structure and the vivdness of the essay is good, but the ending is confusing and leaves the reader clueless.