An American Childhood

Seven year old tomboyish little girl who likes playing sports with others, ends up in trouble by throwing snowballs at random cars. A furious skinny redheaded men chases Mikey and seven year old girl just to have a word? I think he should of just stoped after running couple minutes. Scare them a little and go back to wherever he was going, I guess maybe he had nothing better to do; so he decided to chase them all the way until he catches them. The essay structure is good and the writer uses a lot of details that creates a lot of vivid images of what happened. The end of it is confusing and leaves the reader in a lot of questions.